Long Vacation....

Packed myself up and embark on this journey... to look for something that was lost.. to look for something that is precious.. to understand who I am...

Thursday, August 05, 2004

My short film script

Wrote a short film last time when I was very free in the office. Its not yet finish nor refine, though of putting it up here to remind myself that I should make a short film now, since I have the time. ANyone out there we read this do give me some comment. I felt its a bit cliche though, keke but well its just my rough idea what is going through my mind.

Scene: Ext. Day. Stadium
Narrator: I wouldn’t have noticed yyy if I hadn’t gone round the other side of the stadium to buy a drink.

Yyy is dress in p-t shorts and T-shirt, her hair is tied up in a pony tail and is squatting in-front of the vending machine. She is trying to fish out the coin that drops underneath the vending machine.

Main lead: Do u needs me help?

Yyy smiled and carried on. Main lead went down and help her fish out the coin. Finally, the main lead got the coin.

Main lead: I got it!

Narrator: She looks up and I noticed her eye were a lovely hazel brown like the autumn

Main lead gave the coin to yyy.

Yyy: Thank you for your help.

Yyy get herself a drink and walk away. Main lead also gets a drink. Just than she heard a loud hissed and a sigh. She turned and saw yyy wet from the spilling ‘100 plus’.

Yyy (sighed): What luck!

Main lead: you can have mine. I still have some coins to get another can.

Main lead opens up her can and the ‘100 plus’ spilled out and wet both main lead and yyy. Both of them broke out in laughter.

Yyy(giggling): yyy!

Yyy introduce herself to main lead.

Main lead (giggling): xxx. nice to meet you, yyy. Such a ‘sweet name.

Yyy: Yup, its really a ‘sweet’ name!

Both of them broke out in laughter again.

Scene: Int./ Ext. Various.



Scene: Int. Night. Living room.
Mother and main lead are sitting in the living room watching television programme.

Main lead: Mother. How do you meet father?

Mother: Why do you ask suddenly?

Main lead: well just want to know.

Mother: Well, it’s not something I’m proud of, and I’ll only say it once.

It was then I experienced a feeling I had never known before: a fizzing and a buzzing and certain giddiness, Not only with your dad, but with anywhere, at any time.

Well, I thought it must be love. But this puzzled me because your dad wasn’t very clever, and didn’t have much to say, except to exclaim how beautiful I was. Perhaps he was handsome? But no, looking in the magazines, I realized it wasn’t that either. But the feeling wouldn’t go away. Then, on a quiet night, your dad begged me for a kiss. The frizzing began and as he clutched me to him, I felt that I would never lover another, and yes he could kiss her and after that, they would marry.

Mother paused and she was overcome with emotion.

Main lead (begged): and?

Mother: the worst is still to come.






Scene: Int. Day. Main lead’s living room
Today is xxx’s birthday. Yyy surprise her by bringing her a cake to her house. The door bell ring.

Main lead: I will go get it Maria.

Yyy: Surprise! Happy birthday, sweetie!

Yyy smile and show a cake to main lead.

Scene: Int. Day. Main lead’s room.
Yyy: Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to xxx. Happy birthday to you! Make a wish before you blow out the candle.

Main lead closes her eye and makes a wish and blow out the candle. Yyy hugged her and gave a kissed on the main lead’s cheek.

Montage still:
Main lead cut the cat\ke. Yyy smear cream on main lead’s nose. Both of them have cream fight. Chase around the room.

Both of them were lying on the floor, the birthday cake half-eaten. Both of their face is full of cream. Yyy stroking main lead’s head.

Narrator: she stroked my head for a long time and then we hugged and it felt like drowning. Then I was frightened but couldn’t stop. There was something crawling in my belly. I had an octopus inside me.

And it was evening and it was morning; and another day. After that we did everything together and I stay with her as often as I could.
My mother seemed relieved that I spend more time on my study and for a while made no mention of the amount of time I spent with yyy.





Scene : Int. Day. Main lead room.
Main Lead (Girl) and his “gf” are alone in the room studying. Main lead (girl) touches “gf” and steals a peck on her cheek. At the same moment, main lead’s mother happens to return home from work. She quietly opens the room’s door to check on her daughter. It so happen she caught the couple in action. Main lead’s mother is shock and rushes into the room.

Mother: What the hell, both of you think you are doing?

The couple is shock to hear & see the main lead’s mother.

Main lead: Mother!

Mother: Maria! Come in quickly and help me separate them!

“Gf”: Let us off Auntie!

Maria (the maid) came into room. The couple is clinging onto each other, while the Main lead’s mother is trying to separate the couple away.

Mother: Maria! Still stand there for what! Come quickly and help me grab hold of xxx. I want to throw this madness out of my house!

Maria (Maid) grabs hold of main lead, while mother drag “gf” out of the house and slam the door. She walks angrily into her room and brings out the rattan stick. Main lead is still trying to struggle lose from Maria’s hand, crying and scream.

Main lead: Let me go! We did nothing wrong!

Mother canned the main lead hard. Main lead scream in pain.

Mother: This is madness! I thought yyy is your friend, just to come here to study. Occasionally, I even agree to let her stay overnight here because you said that you all will be doing your project till very late. I never expected this kind of things to happen! This is madness!

Main lead: We did nothing wrong!

Mother: What! You thinking having a relationship with a girl are nothing wrong? I don’t mind you have a relationship with a boy, but with a girl? Must be yyy, she must have lead you astray! She is a lesbian is her problem, still want to drag my daughter along with her. This is incorrigible!

Main lead: No! I love her!

Mother: Than do you not love us! Have you no gratitude to us of bringing you up!

Main lead: Yes, I love both of you all.

Mother: You cannot!

Mother drags main lead to her room.

Main lead: I do, I do, let me go!

Mother: No! You will stay in the room to repent of what you have done!

Main lead: No mother! Please mother!

Mother: You shall stay in the room till you admit to what you have just done is wrong! Tomorrow I will call the school that you are sick and will be taking sick leave for a few days. And at the same time, I will find you a new school.

Main lead: No I don’t want to change school!

Mother: I want you to stay away from her!

Main lead: No I don’t want! Please mother! There are my friends! I don’t want to change school!

Mother: You have no right to make any decision. I gave birth to you and you have to listen to me!

Main lead begs her mother. Mother throws her to bed and lockes the door.

Mother: Maria! These few days while I’m away, I want you to keep a watch on xxx. Without my permission, don’t let her out of the house. Nor do you allow yyy to come and find her. Do you understand?

Maria: Yes mum.

Mother search xxx’s bag and found her hp. She looks through her list and found yyy’s number. She gave yyy a call and demands to talk to her mother.

Mother: You daughter is outrages! She is a lesbian that is her problem. Don’t she dare to come lead my astray like her. I don’t want your daughter to come near my daughter or else I will called the police and be prepare to receive a lawyer letter from me!

Main lead can hear her mother talking in the living room. Main lead crave up in bed and continue to cry.

Scene: Int. Night. Kitchen.
Father came back from work. Mother starts complaining about their daughter. From the moment Father steps into the house to the moment he sat down at the dinning table to have his dinner.

Mother: You finally come back. I want to talk to you about your daughter. The daughter of yours did an outrage thing today. You know what, she kisses a girl today. You still remember yyy? The one, that always come to our house to study. She is a lesbian, if I know that I won’t not have let her befriend our daughter, not to say to let her stay over at our place. If wasn’t I who come back early, I don’t know what they will do. This is outrage. Really waste my effort to treat yyy like my own daughter last time.

Father: Your daughter’s matter you handle can already.

Mother: What? Your daughter is also you responsible, why should I be the only one worrying. What become of her today, is all you fault too.

Father finished his food and gets up to go bathroom.

Mother: Don’t you walk away. This house will be gone in no time…




Scene: Int. Night. Parent’s room.
Mother: … if it wasn’t I who take care of these and that. What have you done? All you know is work and work. Don’t want to talk about it. The more I think about it the more, I wonder why did I marry to you at the first place.

Mother still nagging and father tug himself in bed. Mother finally switch off the light.

Scene: Int. Night living room & main lead’s room
The house is dark, everyone in the house is asleep. Maria came out of her maid room to the kitchen to make a cup of milo, wet a towel and went to main lead’s room. Main lead lay on the bed, still crying.

Maria: Feeling better my girl? I have made you a cup of Milo, come drink it while it’s still hot.

Main lead sat up and gulps down the Milo and than she choke on the hot Milo.

Maria: Drink slowly, it’s hot. Still hurts?

Maria took out the wet towel and clean main lead wound. Main lead turn over so that Maria could reach her back. Than Main lead could feel Maria’ breath on her neck. Than Maria began to stroke her head and shoulders. Quite suddenly main lead turns and kissed her.

Narrator: We made love and I hate it and hate it, but would not stop.

Scene: Int. Various. Day
Narrator: The next day, everything is as what mother had said. I did have a fever and she called the school that I wouldn’t be going to school for a few days. While I lay shivering in my bed, she ‘comb’ my room and found all the letters, all the cards, all the jottings of my own and threw them down the rubbish chute. She throws a lot more than the letters that day. I don’t think she knew. In her head she was still mother, but not my mother any more.

As for Maria and me neither one of us mention about what happened that night. We still chat as always like two good friends. After a few days, my mother told me she has found a new school for me and will personally drives me to the school everyday.



Scene: Int. Day. Car
Mother and Main lead inside the car. Mother is driving Main lead to school. Main lead is eating her sandwiches

Mother: It takes me much afford to find a school to accept you at this end of the term. You must be a good girl and study hard Mummy will drive you to school and fetch to school every morning and Auntie Maria will fetch you home after school.

Main lead just sit in the car eats her bread.

Mother: Your ‘O’ level is around the corner, I want you to go to a junior colleague. So I want you to go home early everyday to prepare for your examination. It’s for your own good. I will call on you after your school to check whether you are doing your revision. Be a good girl and don’t let us down okay?

Main lead just nods her head. They reach the school gate. Main lead says good bye to her mother and goes to school.

Scene: Ext. Day. On the way home.
Maria and Main lead is walking home.

Main lead: Maria?

Maria: Yes?

Main lead: Can you please let me go and find yyy? I want to go see her badly.

Maria: But…

Main lead runs off, before Maria can reply her.

Scene: Ext. Day. In front of yyy’s house
Main lead stands in front of yyy’s house. She hesitates for awhile whether to knock on the door. After awhile, she pick up the courage to knock on the door. Someone open up the door. It is yyy’s mother.

Main lead: Hello auntie, I’m yyy’s classmate is she around.

Yyy’s mother: Yes, come in. She is in her room.

Yyy came to the door. When she saw me she tried to shut it.

Main lead (begged): I’ve got to talk to you. She nodded and let me slip pass.

Scene: Int. Day. yyy’s room.
Both of them sat at the bed in silence. Yyy looked tired and crumpled like a balloon full of old air. Main lead touched her cheek, but she winced and pulled away.

Yyy: We can’t see each other its wrong.

Yyy started to tug at the quilt. Main lead stretched out to her and kissed her and kissed her till both of them were sweating and crying with mixed up bodies and swollen.

Narrator: I think we cried each other to sleep. When I woke up it was nightfall. I turn around and see yyy asleep beside me. I kissed her one last time and left the house.

Scene: Day. Various.
Narrator: By the end of that year I was my old self again. Yyy had gone away to Australia for study and I made it to the junior colleague, just what my mother wanted me to. No one mentioned the Incident, and no one seemed to notice that Maria had packed her luggage and left.

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